Sunday, 22 May 2016

Camp writing

Hanmer springs forest camp

The overflowing water bucket topples over onto the fearless people.

The boiling hot pools rush with people.

The rushing water streams down the lazy 
river.      


Spotlight


The deafening sounds of screams echo from the triage.

The bloody bruised knee buckles to the ground.

The sneaky person dashes to the playground.


By Ollie

1 comment:

  1. I like when you said fearless people I really enjoyed this pice of writing

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